Lucy the 11 year old girl
Lucy was the most beautiful and sweetest girl you could ever meet because her words were like soft pleasant musical notes. Her heart was solid gold and pure. She had lots of money but it was nothing to her, she had something better than money - she had LOVE! No one can buy that. On most days she would go help out at the Salvation Army and the SPCA too. She had two dogs. One was a beagle named Kora and the other a king purebred named Patches. She also had a cat named Miley and a bunny named Harry Hopson. So you know how kind and sweet she was, loving and generous like a machine that wouldn’t stop giving poor people things to have. All these things made a great, friendly person who mostly spent her money on others, but that doesn’t mean she didn’t treat herself when the fashion sales came on.
2 comments:
I love what you have writen.It made a picture in my head.Lucy,the 11 year old girl seems very nice!You have used lovely description.I really loved it. :)*_*
I LOVED UR DESCRIPTION BECAUSE I HAVE A PICTURE IN MY HEAD AND U USED HEAPS OF INTERESTING LANGUAGE FEATURES.SO WELL DONE AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
:O:):):):):O
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