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Tuesday, 13 March 2012

In the shed

                                                                                                                           
In the shed              
Walt write a description using colourful adjectives
The children pushed open the door. Black and grey rats came out  of the door. The frightened children screamed and went inside and locked themselves in and then they saw a magic machine. Their dad’s name was Joe and  their mum’s name was Jones.   When the children switched the machine on, they got  transformed to another country.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Really nice descritive words in your story ,I like it.:)*_*

Anonymous said...

Really nice descritive words in your story ,I like it.:)*_*