Paragraph writing

When the children pushed open the door, rats came scrambling out.  The children screamed! Then they went inside, but they got locked in, because the door automatically locked behind them.  They saw a fascinating magic machine  in the room. When the children switched it on, they got transformed to another country.

By CB

In the shed

                                                                                                                           

In the shed              

Walt write a description using colourful adjectives

The children pushed open the door. Black and grey rats came out  of the door. The frightened children screamed and went inside and locked themselves in and then they saw a magic machine. Their dad’s name was Joe and  their mum’s name was Jones.   When the children switched the machine on, they got  transformed to another country.